that was really good.
i loved the descriptions, and how it started out happy then it got sadder and sadder...
i can't find anything wrong with it but who cares about grammar anyway?

keep writing

That was very good. The metaphors are amazing.
And the changes in perspective are interesting, although I'm not sure I like them...

very, very nice

Hey it's Katie returning your previous review. That was really sad. T_T Believe me, I know the feeling of hopelessness and wanting to get away from everything. it's always good writing stories / poems that the readers can relate to. Good work! :)

~Katie *

It was great, but I feel as if it was dragged on.

Great job. This was definitely an unusual perspective, which is always a good thing in poetry.

aww that almost made me cry. cause i understand the underlying meaning. i also think it was really creative how you used the sunflower to represent the change in your life. nice work.

i love sunflowers, this is really creative.Thanks for your review and keep writing.jean

This is a really good poem. I like how the sunflowers are both euphoric and a prison. Very cleverly written. Great work and definatley keep writing.

My only correction: "Like Wendy in The Wizard of Oz". The girl from the Wizard of Oz is Dorthy, not Wendy. But that's okay, this poem is still really good.

A touching poem, which I enjoyed reading. There's some lovely imagery in there. Well done.