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| dreamforever101 2006-09-03 ch 1,  | abuseI liked the beginning and rich vocabulary you used :D .. but thenn... I think it would have been less of just a rant and more of a poem if you hadnt started swearing so much! plz review back :) -Dreamforever101 |