Wow, I like this story. The characters are brilliant, and the idea is great!

Awesome story. It gives a backstory about how previous elementals lived, and in this case, died. However, I don't understand the concept of the gems. The future elementals were bron with these powers. Were they broken and the powers released? Think about putting this in your main story.

Speakig about which, the baby. An old saying for a plays is if there is a gun above a fireplace, it will be shot by the last act. Don't just just the baby as a way to kill off your charecters.

Good plot, the charecters act as real as someone with supernatrual powers could act. Some minor grammatical errors, but strong sentances throughout the piece. It was never, 'He just died.' It was always such a detailed death, that the reader feels sad to see them die.

Great piece overall, try to fix up chapter sizes a little bit. Good job.

Nice buyt a bit quick. Five people dead so quick is a bit hard to believe but otherwise well written.

I like the idea of this story.

I highly advise against using a detailed background description for a story, however. Reveal things as they go along, or else the reader isn't really sucked in, you know? Reading just plain facts on a page to get you set up for a story feels more like you're reading a newspaper article, and people do not read those to be entertained.