What I think is you should actually write the story, not just give a vague description of the plot and characters, and then expect reviews. Especially with an M rating. It sounds promising, but this is like reviewing an anime based on catchphrases and stills, or a videogame based on its concept art.

Additonally, unless you are currently actually a employed creator (in which case, I'll feel like the biggest idiot alive) stop talking about how good a show you'd think this'll be and how you've copywritten everything and how you don't care about what the station likes it. According to the Fictionpress directory, there are 4,615 authors with pieces in the Manga section. Undoubtably, all of them think their respective stories would be a good manga/anime, or else they wouldn't post them. But even if the fates smile, I'd say that not even 1 percent of those people will become anime creators/writers, and only about 5-10 percent will be able to support themselves on their writing. Just stop acting like it's a given that this will become an anime. I talk about "theme songs' and 'credits' too, but I think you're taking it a step too seriously.

Finally (damn, this all sounds too negative) the majority of stories in your "in progress" section sound good, especially HENtai and the one you say is based on Naruto. Good luck, Ms. C R E A T E.