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Erlkoenigin 2008-02-19 . chapter 4
a beautiful image. "Power" would have been a good title
Erlkoenigin 2008-02-19 . chapter 2
You also like mirrors. "Brilliance" is a beautiful word (a least for me as non-antive-speaker)
Erlkoenigin 2008-02-19 . chapter 1
I like this Haiku. I have always been fascinated by mirrors and this is a very good charaterization
Guardrail 2007-02-11 . chapter 12
Beautiful. I love the last line. Keep up the great work.
Guardrail 2007-02-11 . chapter 7
I love the peaceful feel to this. A great haiku.
Guardrail 2007-02-11 . chapter 1
Beautiful. I love the description "world behind the silver." Great work, keep writing.
Inktipped sword 2007-01-05 . chapter 8
Haikus 5 7
then 5 syllables are there
do you see? ok.

The last line of 8
"an equation is born" is
six syllables. do you see?
BearHeart 2006-10-02 . chapter 9
I like it. Makes me smile.
BearHeart 2006-10-02 . chapter 10
Again, well said.
BearHeart 2006-10-02 . chapter 11
Well said.
moonsliver86 2006-09-05 . chapter 5
i really like this... i'm slightly partial to winter and ice... :)
moonsliver86 2006-09-05 . chapter 4
i like the imagery of this one... keep it up... good haiku...
moonsliver86 2006-09-05 . chapter 3
nice interpretation of the TV... good job...
moonsliver86 2006-09-05 . chapter 2
another interesting poem... this is much better than the first...
moonsliver86 2006-09-05 . chapter 1
this haiku is interesting... the concept is good but the first and last line seem to be oddly constructed... not really sure but that's the way it comes to me... but, overall, an imaginative and well-written poem
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