 Erlkoenigin 2008-02-19 . chapter 4a beautiful image. "Power" would have been a good title |
 Erlkoenigin 2008-02-19 . chapter 2You also like mirrors. "Brilliance" is a beautiful word (a least for me as non-antive-speaker) |
 Erlkoenigin 2008-02-19 . chapter 1I like this Haiku. I have always been fascinated by mirrors and this is a very good charaterization |
 Guardrail 2007-02-11 . chapter 12Beautiful. I love the last line. Keep up the great work. |
 Guardrail 2007-02-11 . chapter 7I love the peaceful feel to this. A great haiku. |
 Guardrail 2007-02-11 . chapter 1Beautiful. I love the description "world behind the silver." Great work, keep writing. |
 Inktipped sword 2007-01-05 . chapter 8Haikus 5 7
then 5 syllables are there
do you see? ok.
The last line of 8
"an equation is born" is
six syllables. do you see? |
 BearHeart 2006-10-02 . chapter 9I like it. Makes me smile. |
 BearHeart 2006-10-02 . chapter 10Again, well said. |
 BearHeart 2006-10-02 . chapter 11Well said. |
 moonsliver86 2006-09-05 . chapter 5i really like this... i'm slightly partial to winter and ice... :) |
 moonsliver86 2006-09-05 . chapter 4i like the imagery of this one... keep it up... good haiku... |
 moonsliver86 2006-09-05 . chapter 3nice interpretation of the TV... good job... |
 moonsliver86 2006-09-05 . chapter 2another interesting poem... this is much better than the first... |
 moonsliver86 2006-09-05 . chapter 1this haiku is interesting... the concept is good but the first and last line seem to be oddly constructed... not really sure but that's the way it comes to me... but, overall, an imaginative and well-written poem |