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| sylvia's syndrome 2006-09-03 ch 1,  | abuseHmm. I like poems that have a dash of self-loathing (hence my own piece “Self Portrait”). It’s always interesting to see what another person perceives as their flaws. Anyway, I really like that first line, “something’s pounding on the door of my dreams.” It poses such an interesting thought. Keep up the good work! |