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Reviews For: An Ending Unpredicted
Frail.Wings.Of.Vanity 2008-09-14 . chapter 1
hopeless and endless. i like it alot.
The Un-great-ful 2006-09-25 . chapter 1
Good flow, I think you forged some proper imagery and emotion (sort of) into this piece.

I enjoyed it

Alan.
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