i love the ending...

and thanks for the review. ive held this secret for 1-2 years. many people have told me not to tell until i'm sure that it won't change or im sure i can live with everbody knowing. rite now, im at the point where i HAVE to tell somebody or i will brake.

i love your stuff!

This poem is a lot more serious in stanza layout and somewhat in subject than most of your poems, it just has a more "sophisticated", if you will, feel to it. It's more like a personal note than something to be published, but it's well executed and it is a good read. Well done!

"this is me being real"

this is a -prettypoemgood-work

x3Josh

brought a tear to my eye... awsom piece ov work

A very emotional and heartfelt poem. I liked it a lot. Good work!

Laurel B.

Regret hurts.

EB