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| Enigmatic Margaret 2006-10-06 ch 1, | abuseI really liked that, the imagery was very clear. I really liked the concept, of not looking for love but having it find you. Some people just aren't that patient, and it proves why patience is such a virtue lol.Wish I was more patient. |
| Dice Darwin 2006-09-25 ch 1, | abuseI liked this. It was well written and it had nice emotion to it. I really liked your imagery... that was cool. I hope you're feeling better than you were when you wrote this. Good luck with your life and writing. Dice Darwin ps. I'd appreciate it if you could check out my story Strike Me Down. You might like it. |
| bookface31 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abuseI think this is a very interesting letter. It's kind of mysterious, and makes a great short story. It has a few little hidden messages and themese in it, too. It's very well-written. I think I'll check out some of your other work to as well, now. Keep on writing. --bOOkface31-- |
| ilive4no1-almost 2006-09-04 ch 1, | abusewell, I don't really know all that much about fables, but it was enjoyable to read. it had a poetic feel to it, which was nice. the only thing i might recommend is more description of what's around. The imagery in my head was kind of "cut off" in certain places. But other wise I really liked this. |