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Reviews For: Forgiveness
Dale Christopher 2006-09-05 . chapter 1
Though it lack the imagery I constantly look for in a haiku, I truly love the message of this one. Giving the person the chance to redeem him or herself is a powerful act of mercy, and one that can only be served by the strong of heart and mind. Another fantastic haiku.

Daze
Basara 2006-09-05 . chapter 1
true to it's message...

nice...
moonsliver86 2006-09-04 . chapter 1
good haiku and interesting concept but there is still space for improvement.
sylvia's syndrome 2006-09-04 . chapter 1
This is nice. It’s a thoughtfully written piece, and I like the message. Keep up the good work!
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