lovely but why does eveyone I know who writes poems have to write sad ones?

Nitpicky detail flow stuff:

"For time only zips by."

I dunno...somehow the kind of more antiqued, elegant "For" clashes with the modern, youthful "zips". Don't ask me why i just posted a review just over this...OCD ness :D

Then again... my poetry is pretty miserable. I shouldn't be critical of yours...hehehe..sorry.

wow!

this was an awe inspiring poem, that im positive ALL can relate to

well done, ma'am!

I know how this feels, I've been through it three times. All of them are still with us though. I know this sounds lame, but your grandfather is still with you in your heart and your soul, and he as well as the Lord and Jesus guide us every day. May you be spirited to happier days.

-Edward 04612

This is really well written, great! I also like your penname lots! Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^