um... kinda just happens in a firestorm there at the end, huh? I mean, relative to the amount of time you spend talking about how kris is such an idiot, the whole development of love/break-up/suicide thing happens kinda quick. my suggestion would be to add more in there, but thats just me. i liked it, though.

that was... f**ked up... no not ur fic, ur fic was brilliant. it just's so messed up that one minute u're completely, delirously happy and the next ur whole life is falling apart...

neway, it's a really good fic. how bout making another one on kris's perspective? it'd give a good insight on both characters :)

wow, that was such a cool story, i love some of the stuff in it, amzing!

Wow... that was extremely powerful, although I am still rather confused as to why Kris would suddenly change tack after so long. But you portrayed emotions very well, and it contains ups and downs and how some people... just rely on one person for that happiness.

I couldn't see the break up coming, and somehow, the main character killing herself seems logical and in-character with the person you have created.

i liked it. :)