Other than the fact that most of the charactors were either way obvious or psychic.. this was a pretty good story.
Nothing else really to say.
Luck writing.

A nice little story.. lovely to read if you want something more 'lovey-dovey' i guess (: I would say some of it is a little cringeworthy :P But in the end it was all good so.. yeah (:

Aw. Love the bitter sweet ending. My favs were Poison and Craige. Both so nice and cute, but I wonder why their relationship was secret? Loved them together though! Also that teacher who marked their maths test... respect. No teacher of mine has ever returned a test that fast!! :)

Isaac is so shy.

3:"and now talking" no?

4:"he was wearily expecting" warily, unless he's tired.

5: it's nice to know what Michael is feeling about his little stalker.

6: Doesn't Micheal's epiphany come rather suddenly? Isaac being missing doesn't seem quite enough to me, but if Michael's POV in chapter five was earlier (more distant between the two segments)...

What is this school's schedule? How many classes a day? They have lunch during algebra then go home afterward?

10: "denile is a river in Egypt" denial

What kind of jobs do Michael's parents have that they can be gone for so long?

15: Wow, 'love' not like or even really like. He doesn't even build to it as in I like boys, er, one boy in particular, I mean, I like you. I had no idea he was so straightforward.

Why do the kids at that school believe that it's any of their business who someone is attracted to? I've overheard conversations about peoples' sexuality at work and the younger ones are more accepting while the older more gossipy.

21: "Craig was going to have to tell Michael what was going on... Craig decided to talk to Michael about what was going on." And then he does it.

23: Man, Ben can read minds.

Michael shouldn't be coming out because he loves Isaac. These are different things. If he breaks up with Isaac that won't make him magically straight. He should come out because he is no longer is willing to lie about who he is or what he is. Coming out to his parents is for himself, not for anyone else.

24: Poor Michael.

This was a good story, fairly realistic with interesting characters. I enjoyed it.

It wasn't underwhelming at all. It was amazing. I want to know what happens when Isaac finds out about Craig and Poison. This story was really emotional and very well written.

I know this review is... Alittle late beings as you fiinished this story forevers ago. But I just read it and it was super awesome, and I loved it! :D

awesome work!

This is AWESOME! And I know the copywrite date is 2006, so it's probably mega old, but I just had to say that this was fantastical and I will definitely be reading more of your work. It made me smile, laugh, cry and seriously want to scream out loud - but I couldnt coz everyone would look at me like I should go back to the assylum. Hehe.. he. O_o. Well, I'm off to go sleepy now, and I hope to hear more from you if you happen to still be publishing new works on this site. Lots of love!

hey, great story so far!! I have to go now, but just wanted to point somethings out before i forgot about them.
I find that when you're reading something that isn't in first perpective (ex: "I like cats) it's very hard to get into the character's mind to understand them, while if you do write in first perpective, then it will excite the readers more and make them want more.
So just keep that in mind for when you write another story; maybe you'll try it in first per.!!
Anyways, great job!
:K
Bloodfeeder

OK, this guy is FREAKISHLY shy. Holy crap!

Next!

I like this one. Ur stories are good, the majority of them seem to hit key target points in reality. Keep it up.

Aah, this made me cry! It was so sad...yet so incredibly sweet! Poor Michael, I can't imagine what it'd be like to have parents not accept you and...hurt you. Aww, I wanna hug them both!

You're one of my favorite authors! :)

...too bad there isn't a sequal...

This is such a cute story! ^.^

The story is wonderful! (Like the other ones that I read.)
I just don't know how to explain it, but I definitely see it relating to every day life.
I feel bad for Michael and with his parents unable to accept who he is. I did some interrigating on my parents and asked if my brother was homosexual, what would they have done? Both of them replied, "I would punch him and then kick him out of the house." Wasn't a joke either...
Hmm for some reason I feel relieved to not be a devoted Christian, or in fact, not Christian at all, but still hold respect to God.

Hmm getting off topic =P
So, lovely story! I really liked it =)