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| Gun 2 the Heart 2008-03-19 ch 24,  | abuseThe story is wonderful! (Like the other ones that I read.) I just don't know how to explain it, but I definitely see it relating to every day life. I feel bad for Michael and with his parents unable to accept who he is. I did some interrigating on my parents and asked if my brother was homosexual, what would they have done? Both of them replied, "I would punch him and then kick him out of the house." Wasn't a joke either... Hmm for some reason I feel relieved to not be a devoted Christian, or in fact, not Christian at all, but still hold respect to God. Hmm getting off topic =P So, lovely story! I really liked it =) |
| Back of Beyond 2008-02-20 ch 24, | abuseGreat story, shame there's no more to read! :] |
| XxAmericanxBeautyxX 2008-01-14 ch 24, | abuseLovely story. I loved it. :) |
| lovewritermaiko 2007-12-31 ch 24, | abuseaw... sweet but what kind of parents does michael have? cavemen? sorry hehe i so feel your story..^-^ |
| Gravilove19 2007-10-01 ch 24, | abuseaw its really sweet I hope to read more from you ^.^ |
| mia5081 2007-08-10 ch 24, | abuseI loved your story! Great job =) ~Mia |
| Lapsis Linguae 2007-06-03 ch 14, | abuseLol, I like Rise Against more than MCR. MCR's decent though. That's my kinda concert. Woot. |
| I'll Be Your Fairytale 2007-06-01 ch 24, | abuseAww, that's cute. Poor Michael though. His parents are so damned unfair. I don't understand why people just can't accept people the way they are. Hm...Yeah, anyways, fab story, see ya with the next story! Luv, I-B-Y-F, x |
| l'observatrice 2007-05-30 ch 24, | abuse::sobs:: That's the end?!?! It was AWESOME, so that's good, but now I have to find another story to be obsessed with... rawr. Nice job on everything though! ...And no, I wasn't pmsing when I wrote this. I'm emotional. XD |
| trouble-makerz-4ever 2007-05-29 ch 24, | abuseyay! a conclusion! i luved it. im just sad the story's over. Jynx |
| Abstruse Blue 2007-05-29 ch 24, | abuse*bawls eyes out for a few minutes* BEAUTIFUL! ah, just what I needed. Even with the whole ** with Michael's parents, the ending was good for me. This is definitely another one of my faves from you! And I'm looking forward to that new story I see in your FicFolder. hehe |
| DiamondKing 2007-05-29 ch 24, | abuseWell...I do like the ending. Like you said, it does feel rushed (towards the end at least, especially the last line), but what can I say? The story as a whole was great and the best part is that revision will only make the story better. Thank you for you time and for writing this story. |
| vimaro22 2007-05-28 ch 24, | abuseInteresting end. It feels a little rushed towards the end, I think. But overall, pretty good. I like it. |
| Scribbles Go On Forever 2007-05-28 ch 24, | abuseah *sighs* beautiful...a perfect amount of angst and romance...thank you so much:) ps (I used to be ElvenTwinLover) |
| Kizuna 2007-05-28 ch 24, | abuseIt's finished. I'm a little sad. But now they're together!:D And that makes me happy!;) This is a really good story, I loved it; very good work!:D I'm looking forward to your new romance story!:) |