I love this poem. So true and so personal. Thanks for sharing it with us. Excellent work!

I love the flow of this poem. The repetition didn't feel forced or boring. Every stanza had its own focus so there was no other real repetition beyond the first line. And again that openness to God that I just find beautiful. The third stanza was particularly good to me. It just captured so much. The entire poem did. Well done.

nice repitition and well written

Yep, He sure is alive! Beautiful piece. Brillant work.

I love it. It is beautifull. it could be a psalm itself, don't you think?

Beautiful, brillant work. Write on...

Beautiful poem, great verses too. This is one of my favorites also... Psalm 139:23-24Search me, O God, and know my heart;test me and know my anxious thoughts.See if there is any offensive way in me, and lead me in the way everlasting. Keep up the awesome work. God Bless ya.