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Reviews For: Sing Me Something Soft

Anaare
2006-09-04
ch 1,
abuseA touching poem, beautifully crafted. I have enjoyed reading it, truly. Excellent work!
Joshua Hartman
2006-09-04
ch 1,
abuseI really love this. "Just as I never meant for your face to dissolve,"

Love it.

It would be an honor if you would take a look at some of my writing. Thanks again!
sylvia's syndrome
2006-09-04
ch 1,
abuseThis piece is truly striking. The diction is just full of possible meanings, there are so many layers to this… I love it. However, I have a suggestion: utilize your summary! It’s a free chance for you to grab the attention of people so that they will read your work. Why waste it on something as boring as “poem.” We know it’s a poem— tell us something we don’t know!
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