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| Anaare 2006-09-04 ch 1, | abuseA touching poem, beautifully crafted. I have enjoyed reading it, truly. Excellent work! |
| Joshua Hartman 2006-09-04 ch 1, | abuseI really love this. "Just as I never meant for your face to dissolve," Love it. It would be an honor if you would take a look at some of my writing. Thanks again! |
| sylvia's syndrome 2006-09-04 ch 1, | abuseThis piece is truly striking. The diction is just full of possible meanings, there are so many layers to this… I love it. However, I have a suggestion: utilize your summary! It’s a free chance for you to grab the attention of people so that they will read your work. Why waste it on something as boring as “poem.” We know it’s a poem— tell us something we don’t know! |