All the things girls do for love..

WOW, that is a dramatic yet briliant way to put a very serious issue. Ill keep an eye out for more of your stuff. keep writing.

that's really amazing. thats so sad. i love the line about christmas lights in july. really lovely images and stuff. its really good

this is definitely one of my favorites^.^
i love it

the last line is so ** wonderful... it is a poem upon it self.

the first line & the last line is abso**inglutely amazing, as is everything inbetween. i like the nameing of 'Mr Someone' ~Bex xx

again, your writing really emotes very well. im not sure why, but i love that it does. to me, the topic is rather twisted, but seems to delve into human depths perhaps, of the odd turns a mind can take. good job on this. btw, why is it you like to use alice as a topic so much?

"Mr. Someone..."

the last line is ** beautiful

WOW! this is my favorite poem of yours that i have seen, it's so amazingly written, with sadness and angst...i am crying for in away i can see how this poem relates to me! i love the last line! Once again, beautifully written!

ps. adding to my c2 and fav. list!

wow...twisted, raw, straight forward, and i gotta say creative and interesting. nice

I adore this poem, I love the idea that she's still so little she needs a night light but none the less she can sleep with a whole bunch of "mr. someone"s.

I like alotx

Amazing job. I really liked this one.Thankd for reviewing my haiku!~Rowan~

the drug theme aside, i can really relate to this. it reminds me of things i've written before and emotions i've felt and situations i've been in way too often to be healthy. but this is verry well written, to be honest. i love the images, especially the "cheshire grin." you can feel the girl's pain, and it is easily related to. it hurts, like poetry should. verry good work.

I didn't review this yet?? (wow I didn't review this yet). How could that have happened? Oh well...the point of this review is you REVIEW this poem (god I'm feeling smart today). I really liked it. Very origonal. I love the first line. Beautiful.

-and PLEASE tell me how to make that little heart next your name! Ha.

Love, Ellen

O.o...And I thought I touched on rough subjects. Bravo, and I'll be sure to read your others. My 'Rapine' is very similiar to this, but no where near it's audicity. Kudos, a million times over.

Laters,

KD