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Peanuts Factory 2008-04-25 . chapter 1
All the things girls do for love..
11BlackBleedingRoses 2008-03-10 . chapter 1
WOW, that is a dramatic yet briliant way to put a very serious issue. Ill keep an eye out for more of your stuff. keep writing.
MarvellousMarvin 2007-05-15 . chapter 1
that's really amazing. thats so sad. i love the line about christmas lights in july. really lovely images and stuff. its really good
Kharris Kyryn 2007-04-10 . chapter 1
this is definitely one of my favorites^.^
i love it
amillionlittlepieces 2007-03-15 . chapter 1
the last line is so ** wonderful... it is a poem upon it self.
polka dots and addictions 2006-12-01 . chapter 1
the first line & the last line is abso**inglutely amazing, as is everything inbetween. i like the nameing of 'Mr Someone' ~Bex xx
Honor Bound 2006-10-25 . chapter 1
again, your writing really emotes very well. im not sure why, but i love that it does. to me, the topic is rather twisted, but seems to delve into human depths perhaps, of the odd turns a mind can take. good job on this. btw, why is it you like to use alice as a topic so much?
the naked civil servant 2006-10-25 . chapter 1
"Mr. Someone..."

the last line is ** beautiful
lilyqueen777 2006-10-20 . chapter 1
WOW! this is my favorite poem of yours that i have seen, it's so amazingly written, with sadness and angst...i am crying for in away i can see how this poem relates to me! i love the last line! Once again, beautifully written!

ps. adding to my c2 and fav. list!
magnusthewolf 2006-10-07 . chapter 1
wow...twisted, raw, straight forward, and i gotta say creative and interesting. nice
createanarchy 2006-09-28 . chapter 1
I adore this poem, I love the idea that she's still so little she needs a night light but none the less she can sleep with a whole bunch of "mr. someone"s.

I like alotx
All Alone With Her Thoughts 2006-09-16 . chapter 1
Amazing job. I really liked this one.Thankd for reviewing my haiku!~Rowan~
breakdown in the waiting room 2006-09-15 . chapter 1
the drug theme aside, i can really relate to this. it reminds me of things i've written before and emotions i've felt and situations i've been in way too often to be healthy. but this is verry well written, to be honest. i love the images, especially the "cheshire grin." you can feel the girl's pain, and it is easily related to. it hurts, like poetry should. verry good work.
theatrical rhapsodies 2006-09-13 . chapter 1
I didn't review this yet?? (wow I didn't review this yet). How could that have happened? Oh well...the point of this review is you REVIEW this poem (god I'm feeling smart today). I really liked it. Very origonal. I love the first line. Beautiful.

-and PLEASE tell me how to make that little heart next your name! Ha.

Love, Ellen
Karine Dragon'sheart 2006-09-13 . chapter 1
O.o...And I thought I touched on rough subjects. Bravo, and I'll be sure to read your others. My 'Rapine' is very similiar to this, but no where near it's audicity. Kudos, a million times over.

Laters,

KD
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