|Reviews for precipice|
| Halcyon Impulsion 12/14/08 . chapter 1
What a day to read this poem. It actually brought tears-it sharp and wonderful and it describes the way I feel today. Thank you for sharing this-it's a gorgeous piece and I there isn't anything I would change about it. I'd quote my favorite parts, but that would be all of it :)
| pennydeath 11/16/06 . chapter 1
I really love this, both the words and the structure. You're awesome at crafting phrases that sing.
| mizu no kokoro 10/13/06 . chapter 1
wow, i love this. intricate and sophisticated. wonderful work
| primal injection 9/11/06 . chapter 1
havnt visited your work for ages but this really didnt disappoint. Such brilliant language. I love this kind of abstract writing so so much...
| no.peace.los.angeles 9/6/06 . chapter 1
M, that's nice. You have such a wide vocabulary, and that makes reading your work exciting. It's rich and lush. Beautiful. I'd just try not to use so many abstract images all at once, that's all. Keep writing! :)
| Aimee Raven 9/6/06 . chapter 1
Oh my god...this is amazing! The choice of words, the perfect flow, the imagery! This is definitely one of your best works I think, it seems so flawless! Your diction is remarkable! "thread my admiration forward to captivation" indeed...I loved that...I'm so tired, but this really sort of perked me up..great, great job! Love, Mia
| lackluster 9/5/06 . chapter 1
the first line is well written, as if the poem is a continuation of something else. lovely.