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Loriency 2006-09-04 . chapter 1
i'm quite curious as to what inspired this quite expressive and profound piece of imagination, and i'm also curious as to what else you could work in this same area. I often get inspired to just write "scenes," where it's not a one-shot and it's not a short story or a story, it's literally just a random out-of-the-blue scene. The way that i'm inspired by those strikes me similarly to how you wrote this--where it starts and ends with no actual purpose other than to just have it. Although perhaps you have a purpose...i don't know. Could you possibly write other chapters in this same field? With a different high, a different scenario, yet similar? interesting... Well done, though. I can see it...not first hand, but as if i'm sitting on a ledge from 100 yards away and watching the whole thing in slow motion. It's quite fascinating. Good job!
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