 Loriency 2006-09-04 . chapter 1i'm quite curious as to what inspired this quite expressive and profound piece of imagination, and i'm also curious as to what else you could work in this same area. I often get inspired to just write "scenes," where it's not a one-shot and it's not a short story or a story, it's literally just a random out-of-the-blue scene. The way that i'm inspired by those strikes me similarly to how you wrote this--where it starts and ends with no actual purpose other than to just have it. Although perhaps you have a purpose...i don't know. Could you possibly write other chapters in this same field? With a different high, a different scenario, yet similar? interesting... Well done, though. I can see it...not first hand, but as if i'm sitting on a ledge from 100 yards away and watching the whole thing in slow motion. It's quite fascinating. Good job! |