The last two lines really speak to me, the language is tight and I can recall this feeling, especially since I grew up near the sea and spent my teenage time as a lonely romantic--longing for "him", whoever he was :)

lol. this reminds me of something...short but emotions-provoking. u mite wanna make it a lil less vague, but then again, it's just as good as it is. interesting summary btw ^^

~mez~

The last line was amazing.

Utterly romantic and sensual and, guh-worthy. Lovely, lovely, poem.

~* Noelle

The problem, Emeraldi, is that I often have difficulty thinking of new ways to compliment you. This shows off marvelously your ability to, in a very Dickinson-esque way, say very little and yet say very much, and say it beautifully to boot.