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| Reviews for The Fall of the House of Barka |
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   moongazer7 8/1/08 . chapter 2“airforce which the he planned to enlargen” Take it the so it reads airforce which he planned to enlargen |
| Soul Of Music 11/1/06 . chapter 2 sweet, this looks like it's gonna turn out into a great story dude. |
| Lord-of-Fools 10/22/06 . chapter 1 Not bad, but it's Malian, not Malinese (I even checked to make sure) |
| Turtlesurfthewaves 9/5/06 . chapter 1 Hey this is pretty good! I am impressed. Again, it seems like you are not giving much detail and it is a lil. confusing, but it really caught my attention. I applaude you, good job! :Two thumbs up: |
