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| 1997 2007-04-06 ch 2,  | abuseOh my goodness, THE George Romero? This is looking pretty cool. P.S) You might want to up the story's rating to an "M". Much more suitable to the gory content. |
| 1997 2007-04-06 ch 1, | abuseOK, that's just not fun at all. I don't think I'm going to like Charlie very much. So this story, it's kind of disgusting. Actually, really really disgusting. And considering your warning and everything, I should have known it was going to be. But that never stopped me before, despite my being a huge wimp who can't stomach that much nastiness :(. I guess the horror industry kind of relies on stupid people like me. And I totally didn't realize at first that you were the same guy who wrote Quarantine. HELLO Quarantine writer! P.S) I'm fire-breathing-kitten's alter ego. this account is slightly more anonymous ie) no one I know knows about it. |
| Cirien Phoenix 2006-12-08 ch 5, | abuseTihs giebrbish mhigt be a rael wrod wehn radieng! - This gibberish might be a real word when reading! Interesting and fun, but I think that it detracted from the story for people who could read it. I'm freaked out now and I'm glad I read this, but I'm sick, bleh... Hope you finish it soon! |
| Cirien Phoenix 2006-12-08 ch 4, | abuseUgh. The skin ripping off thing is just nasty. It's excellent in the story, but I'm queasy... |
| Cirien Phoenix 2006-12-08 ch 3, | abuseI'm scared that you don't have gore because that means an upcoming chapter is about to be completely gruesome. |
| Cirien Phoenix 2006-12-08 ch 2, | abuseGood buildup of suspense after the first chapter. I lied, I did keep reading. Nice name dropping in there for George Romero, haha! |
| Cirien Phoenix 2006-12-08 ch 1, | abuseOh my God! I nearly puked. I already don't completely feel good and this story has only strengthened that. I don't know if I can keep reading for now, but I'll try. |
| Spirit Tigress 2006-10-03 ch 5, | abuseDoes Max get a gun? 'Cause he's gonna need one! |
| Spirit Tigress 2006-10-03 ch 4, | abuseThat cleared up a bit of my previous confusion! Nice work with the blood and gore! |
| Spirit Tigress 2006-10-03 ch 3, | abuseThis chap was still good! I'll be waiting for the core! XD |
| Spirit Tigress 2006-10-03 ch 2, | abuseI have a feeling that they are gonna regret moving there! Story sounds great! |
| Spirit Tigress 2006-10-03 ch 1, | abuseNice! I only wish all horror stories started out this way! I feel really bad that I haven't been reading here that much! |
| Jumpin'JackFlash16 2006-09-24 ch 5, | abusehere we go let the zombiefest begin |
| SirScott 2006-09-24 ch 5, | abuseNice chapter. Headphones do seem to eat batteries. This was an interesting chapter, it revealed a lot. Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~ |
| Cheeseraptor5 2006-09-24 ch 5, | abuseOh, great; It finally gets fired up. I can see this being a really nasty and fun story, man. You've really set up the key components well. Augh, now I'm intimidated... I guess we'll just have to see who's zombie tale comes out on top, eh? Bring it on, man! |