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| Curb Crasher 2008-05-07 ch 27, | abuseThis is so cute and sad. Everyone makes mistakes, it seems. But I really hope that people learn to listen more, because, seriously, sometimes they just attack verbally again and again and nothing is ever explained. . . . I really don't like a lot of the nobles and higher-up servants, but, then again, I suppose that's the point. |
| D.H. L'Orange 2008-05-05 ch 2, | abuseupdate time please! |
| tmelange1 2008-04-28 ch 27, | abuseI enjoyed this story very much. It was a very engaging read, filled with interesting characters. I look forward to reading more. |
| Tani Katti 2008-04-13 ch 27, anon. | abuseWhere to start, where to start. . . How about I'm upset that it's incomplete. Yeah, that's a good place to start. This is a really good story, like really good. Your characters, your setting, your plot twists. Exelent. And now I'm left with nothing because you haven't updated in a while. I'm a fairy tale lover so a good fractured fairy tale is a story I'll really enjoy. But more then fracturing it, you've made it completely different and totally your own. It's hard to say who my favorite chacter is, though I do love Sivi. I also love Coredan, Londel, and Peryn. Sivi's kind of hard to explain, Coredan's just too calm about everything, Londel doesn't always get it, and the dog. . . I'm more of a cat person. Anyways, you probibly have better things to do then listen to me rant so I'll go now. I just hope you update one day, or maybe even finish the story so there is no more guess work for me. Tani Katti P.S. Please don't make Londel die or anything else that's horrible. |
| Evelei 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseSo.. I already commented on aarin :( But you know... I wuv yous... Meaning >.> *cough* How are you? lol No no, I know I am the last person in the world who should be begging for an update >.> Seeing as it's clearly been almost an entire year since my story has been updated... But.. yours is better any ways xD :P Just kidding, but you do have my attention back on your story now :P So I will be... patiently...>.> Waiting. =D |
| D.H. L'Orange 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseupdate please! |
| PindrakeCake 2008-03-19 ch 27, | abuseWhy the ** doesn't this story have like thousands or reviews right now? It's amazing and I loved it--I haven't been following this story so I don't know how long it usually takes you to update but if you are planning to abandon this story, please don't. I'm favoriting it right now. Your writing is amazing and I don't think I ever even found a single typo while reading! |
| D.H. L'Orange 2008-03-07 ch 27, | abuseaww man, this is awesome! YOU MUST UPDATE THIS STORY! (if not I will continually harass you until you do). : ) DH |
| Mademoiselle Rouge 2008-01-31 ch 26, anon. | abuseI'm saying that now, so that I can repeat it in the next chapter: YOU HAVE TO UPDATE ! (I'll be back in 10 for a real review ;)) |
| bugger off 2008-01-21 ch 27, | abuse:D yay! cuteness. :) |
| bugger off 2008-01-17 ch 16, | abusethis is swet ... XD I LIKE this. rofl somethings VERY VERY VERY fishy about doriten ... lol and i reckon adding the story to my faves is something that i should do. teehee. ^_^ |
| bugger off 2008-01-15 ch 2, | abuse...omg ... wat a bratty sister. O_O MUST DIE MUST DIE. coredans such a lil sweetie. ^_^ |
| MD 2008-01-13 ch 27, anon. | abuseI love it! It's so awesome that it makes me go squee! Hehe, you probably heard that alot. What are you talking about? Your paragraphs aren't long! I've seen longer ones that are a ** to read. You should just ignore those people. They suck anyway. :P Anyway, back to the story: I love it because there's so much stories involved. Like the plots and stuff. Londel makes me wanna go aw and pet him on the head, except Coredan would probably bite my hand off. And I love the puppy. Hehe, she is so cute. |
| Kilian 2008-01-09 ch 27, | abuseYour story is really great. Londel and Coredan always makes me smile, they are so cute together. And I'm always glad to see Sivi. She's so much fun. |
| Fhar 2008-01-02 ch 27, | abuseOkay, I finally finished all of what you have written so far. Of coarse, the majority of their enemies had to have green magic. It would have been way too easy otherwise, and you seem to like messing with your characters and readers...not that I mind, or have any room to talk. It makes for an amazing story. I can't express how much I love this story. I have a few, currently undifinable, whisps of thought about the recent events that I can't quite put into words right now, but maybe by the time aaron is up again they'll have solidified. Anywho, until next time. Laters. |