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| sporkess 2006-12-29 ch 1,  | abuseAw, this is sad. I mean, the main story is sad enough, but I feel exceptionally sorry for Roxanne. Does she know that her husband loves someone else? I imagine that he loves her, too, and is faithful to her, but it still would be kind of tragic, to know that you're playing eternal second fiddle to the one that got away. Um. I know I may well have missed the point of the story. But I did think the whole situation was sad, too! |
| Vixen of Vienna 2006-09-04 ch 1, | abuseNo, this is not religious at all. I like it. Sure, it is sad, but it is written well. The plotline is good, too. Love the Phantom reference, and it just so turns out I am listening to its music right now as well. |