Kind of confusing, but at the same time, I think I understood it, if that makes any sense. :) You have a lot of talent from what I've read so far--the "go down in history like W.B. Yeats" kind of talent. I can't wait to read more (althoug it will take a while, since you have so much. ^_^)

I love your style.I have to admit that I liked the beginning of this poem better than the end, but keep writing!