This was amazingly well-written.
You're a great writer.

I like the subtle simplicity of the lines "You don’t want to count them / Never were good at Calculus"

i like the allusions you make
and the rhythm of this.
it had this awesome feel like the last lines of the stanzas were going to rhyme, but they didn't. which was really neat.
the imagery is very powerful. i think it's a nice job.

XD You acid-tripper.

Kidding. I totally did a report on acid for health, and this would probably have more colors if you were on it.

Anyhoodles, man! I could totally see this being a song! Sort of. I mean, I'm not much of a tune person (since I'm tone deaf), but seriously. Someone could make it into a song.

Brilliance, I say!

-Sally

Great work. It gives me a feeling of despair and anger, uncomformity with the surroundings, I don't know. I like it.

This was really good. The imagry in the first stanza was excellent. Great work and keep writing.

wow... all i can say... wow..