Quite a great vocabulary you have. And you use it quite well well. _

very emotional, I like your descriptions through out the entire poem. I was a bit confused at the ending, were you hopeful for reuniting or just staying in touch? thanks for sharing...

Always such powerful images! Sorry it took me so long to get around to reading this. x

BEAUTIFUL. A bit overuse of the words 'rose' and 'wings', but I like it. Great work.

This is so beautiful it makes me want to cry. Thank you so much beloved one. I love you.

Hawke