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| Ghost in the Machine 2006-09-06 ch 1, | abuseFunny, but could have used another editing pass to fix the spelling errors. |
| Jerian 2006-09-05 ch 1, | abuse*giggles* This is really good. It sounds a lot like something come out of the anthropology book I used a few years ago. Sentences like "There is evidence to support the fact (...)" help that illusion very well. |