i liked the style of this poem, with the italics. nice touch.

Very nice. I like the repetition. You very aptly captured an atmosphere with this piece.

It's short, but I do like it, especially the last line.

Well this would suck if it happened. But a nice poem.

Nice...interesting...

short and sweet! usually I do not like that but you used the effect perfectly and it worked well with the idea. speaking of which, I like the idea of 'lethargy' stopping you from 'running away again'. I am not sure if you meant this piece to be a medaphor for some something deeper, but I certainly feel something more than what's on the page.

keep up the great work! I am really enjoying this

Ooh, nice. I really like how you formatted it. Like how you made the first four lines normal, next four italicized, next four normal, and the last for italicized again. Nice job. Keep writing! You're a great poet! :)

- sarah (sarah1491)

I like that!

This was really good, I liked it a lot. Great work and definatley keep writing.