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misery sister 2008-04-24 ch 1,	abuseJebus! Very good beginning!
witchwriter 2007-11-09 ch 3,	abusewow, u take forever to update, well I do too so I'm going to shut up now. very short but a nice chappy. evil.
maidengarnet 2007-11-07 ch 3,	abuseWait, so you're not going to update for forever now? That's cruel, man, very cruel! C'mon, please write more! Please? You know you want to. It keeps the clowns away! You don't want the clowns... no one does. Why do people even hire clowns for birthdays? Kids hate them. Please write more soon! T_T
Hydie 2007-11-07 ch 3,	abusewow...this is completely interesting. It's not much of a plot yet, but I can see how that would be with all the bunnies running round. :-D
mell8 2007-11-07 ch 3,	abuseThis is very interesting! I like how she meets the boy and is scared away by the creature in the tree and I'm looking forward to when they meet again and how she reacts. Be careful though, Occlumency is a term from Harry Potter and I don't think it's a term you can get away with using outside of HP fanfiction. I'm can't wait to know more about Alex's aunt and the evil creature reading her mind so please update soon!
KiraLove 2007-11-07 ch 3,	abuse Very good chapter. It's making me want to read more. I want to know more about the boy! Keep it up. My plot bunnies died. I have no plot, but a big ole writing spree of nothing but nonesense. Oh well. Keep it up. Can I have a bunny? --Kira Love
Lexlovely 2007-06-24 ch 2,	abuseI really like this is far, it sounds very interesting. I love the contrast between Alex and Melody. I cannot wait to see what else happens! Update soon please.
KiraLove 2007-02-25 ch 2,	abuseI can't even began to guess what is going to happen next!! It's well written, especially the prolouge, which gave me shivers, for the use of the old rymes hightened the mood. Happy writing to you!! Kira Love
witchwriter 2007-01-28 ch 2,	abuseyes i finally got to update! A verynice chap and I look forward to reading the next one! Evil.
The Green Crow 2007-01-17 ch 2,	abuseThat was such an awesome first chapter! I really love the character of Alex, and the name Melody is so freaking AWESOME lmao. Anyways, please update this story soon, its very interesting and i can't wait to see what happens. Keep imagining. Keep creating. Keep writing. Amina L. Forest
Angel of Ink 2007-01-08 ch 2,	abuseI like it... but what about Hellspawn in Gucci?
Maddie Fyrce 2007-01-05 ch 2,	abuseOnce again, another AMAZING chapter. I love the style. Alex seems completely awesome. Update again soon!! Thanks for the review of my poem, btw. Yeah, its based on my life as of this moment. Sucky, right? Thanks tho. Like I said, update soon!! -Maddie
Maddie Fyrce 2006-11-13 ch 1,	abuseOh my gosh. I love it! This is a super unique story line. I love the format. It's completely great. I've never seen anything like it before. Update soon! I think I'm hooked!! Thanks for reviewing Once Bitten! lol. I pretty much love reviews. -Maddie
witchwriter 2006-09-10 ch 1,	abuseI like how you included the nursery ryhmes.I've forgotten most of mine. I'll wait for more! Evil.
diamond-dust08 2006-09-06 ch 1,	abusehello and hooray for a new reviewer! me, that is. LOL. anyway i don't know the exact mood of this story and i can't offer an objective comment regarding this, but it appears to be really dark and horrifying at this point. i checked the subcategories that you placed it in, but 'horror' was not one of them, so i was really wondering... maybe because of the Ring Around the Rosie nursery rhyme? (which was rumored to be referring to the Black Death, even though we all know it's a bogus claim) or the dark mystery surrounding Tenor (the boy; i imagined him a la The Omen style with your description of the harebell wilting in his grasp)? in any case, it gave me the creeps, and few stories could make me feel that way. the chapter layout is kinda confusing at first, with italics, bolded words and centered paragraphs all mixed up, but at my second reading i guess it's just an acquired taste. or maybe i'm just slow, lol. anyway, i love the surreal flow of the story; the dramatic power of this story is sure to captivate a lot of readers, as what happened to me. the style in which it was delivered was powerful and exquisite; i love your use of words that even the simplest ones seem to be grand and gorgeous. not only that, but the description of the characters was engaging and pretty, which made me feel for this girl even if there was little to go by in imagining her. btw, i haven't seen the last part of the rhyme before, starting with the "it's raining, it's pouring" part.where did you get it (or did you make it on your own)? this is by far one of the best introductory chapters i have ever read, including that of published novels. excellent work! you're on my author alert list already, so once you update i'll be here giving you my thoughts every chapter. regarding creepy nursery rhymes, read the story "Lily Payne" from my fave stories list and you'll see what i mean. XD and oh, so you're Filipino? keep writing! ~DD

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