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| Frozen.by.Sloth 2008-06-24 ch 10, | abuseyo. I just read both of the sequels in one sitting, and I hope you don't mind me reviewing both here. First comes first, and I must say that the beginning, and Nadine's innocence, humor and everything connected just swept me off my feet. I loved reading it, it was often so funny I couldn't even find it in me to laugh. I was just looking at it with a dumbfounded expression (not that I have a mirror here or something, but you catch my drift) for moments, before doubling over with laughter. It was really charming. Then, when all the Nicole trouble came; well, I couldn't believe that a romance story could take such a turn. Lol. To be honest, it makes me highly uncomfortable, but I still love the story. I'm glad Nadine realized that she wasn't right, but they're getting on my nerves with either blaming themselves or each other. They just can't come to terms with the fact they both screwed up and the outcome was royal. I guess that both my frustration and uneasiness with the turn of events can prove your writing skills are great. Well, I think that's all I'm gonna say. Sorry for the length of the review, though. lol. Anyhow... I hope you keep it up; I'd really like for this story to reach it's end. You're doing great. Can't wait for more. :3 Enjoy~ |
| ForeignBelle 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abuseOMG! Please, please update! |
| AJS 2008-06-19 ch 10, | abuseThis is going to be short, because I honesty don't have much to say, even though I hadn't realized that you were still updating!, but thank GOD Nadine finally broke up with Skylar. The whole thing seemed a bit silly in the first place. I couldn't really comprehend why she was still with him even though she had her whole I want to get Thatcher back thing. I don't really understand why Thatcher is working so hard to get back in Nadine's parents' graces since he's not really the one trying to get back together with her anymore. I guess it's just because he liked them and respected them and felt bad to them, but still he's going to some great extremes to regain their respect. For Nadine to do that for Thatcher's grandparents, I think it would make a bit more sense. And even though I can see how Nadine definitely did not help the situation with Thatcher, I still completely understand and can probably relate better to how she was feeling when she when through all of it... I mean, I get that she was kind of wrong, but I think that some of the things she did were justified too and I mean, she's only human and she already had those insecurities and so... Yeah. Like you can't really blame her for a lot of the ways in which she reacted... Skylar was always a bad idea though. Anyways, thanks for updating! I can't wait to read more. -- Alyssa |
| E.E. Whitaker 2008-06-14 ch 10, | abuseso i have been following your epic teenage love stories that stated with "When You Own The Universe", and i have to say that by far you are one of the well written authors and more clever of a plethora of writers...not to gas your head. but seriously, please finish this story, per favore sinorigna lettura...and this is coming from an italian that understands thatcher. |
| Ocean's pebble 2008-06-05 ch 10, | abuseOh my gosh!! this is so good! Man, I really wish I could write like this... Anyway! This is really good, but I would almost say delete this story and add it on to the first one. 'Cause you really leave everything hanging, and I don't really remember if you said that there was a sequel at the end of the 1st story and if you didn't then you should... right... rambling bad... Anyway, this is really good, so keep it up! Never Stop Writing! |
| she gets skills from the pi... 2008-06-05 ch 10, | abusei read your entire story tonight, yes both the first one and this sequel!! hope you give yourself a pat on the back for driving me to lots of tears and laughter in various points and changing my msn name to revolving emo quotes and songs. but im living off the fact that in the end thatcher and nadine will have their perfect ending, or so ive been told by none other than you hahha. well what i guess im trying to say in this extremely roundabout way is please please please UPDATE as soon as your fingers can type and your brain can..think!! |
| a beginner 2008-06-02 ch 10, | abuseand im happy its moving too... :) |
| a beginner 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abusegr8 |
| jennifervu 2008-06-01 ch 10, | abusePLEASE UPDATE! I can't start a story that's not finished, yet I realy want to read this. ): |
| opposites-can-and-WILL-attr... 2008-05-29 ch 10, | abuseomg I LOVE THIS STORY! I'm hooked, adicted, drawn in, trapped in chains and whatever other word you want me to use! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THIS SOON! I JUST LOVE IT SO MUCH PLEASE UPDATE! AND PEEASE MAKE MATTEO AND THATCER GRANDPARENTS LOVE NADINE! ESPECIALY MATTEO! ANN THATCHER! QUICKLY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! |
| Dreamers-Never-Die 2008-05-21 ch 10, | abuseGood story. The tension between the two always seems to threaten to explode. I must admit that its the first time i've seen anyone use 'Nadine' as a name and I personally find it amusing seeing as my name is Nadina and the story is in first person for the most part. |
| IcANcINtHEdARK 2008-05-20 ch 10, anon. | abusei would just like to say that you have accomplished in making the perfect guy. Thatcher has made it into my top 3 list congrats along with Beast and Micheal Moscovits. I love you story, please update soon. |
| mirofreak 2008-05-17 ch 10, | abusehurry hurry! this is so god and i want to know what happens to thatcher and nadine! by the way.. i figured out who i pictured nadine to look like! meagan good is like the perfect nadine. im having a little trouble picturing thatcher though. |
| TheVoice 2008-05-10 ch 10, anon. | abuseOh and I meant to add that the new Coldplay song "Violet Hill" reminds me of this story a bit. |
| TheVoice 2008-05-10 ch 10, anon. | abuseOMG! That was a bit of a cliffhanger! Nadine is just about to start her "mission" and you haven't updated in more than two months! I love this story! Please, please update!! |