You, my friend, far surpass me in the world of double-sided metaphors and heartstrung words. Your work asphyxiates on my soul until I'm barely breathing. Whoever she is, I wish I was her, because if someone talked about me the way you do her, I'd love them no matter what.

i honestly dont know what to say except, this is more of a love story than a poem about claustrophobia... but it was incredible...kario

keep up with the good work

wow, this is so gorgeous...i like the last two lines of the big chunk of lines...you amazed me, honestly...

truly yours...

oh wow the last line hit me hard...i feel like my reviews sound stupid & repeat alot but this is amazing work.

This was a striking piece. Hard and real and beautiful, it took my breath away.

Great job.

-Alice