how is it you have only one review? the first chapter alone deserves a thousand that only praise and beg for more. i say 'only' because this is so perfectly done and written constructive criticism or ANY criticism for that matter is not needed. this is wonderful and i hope you continue despite the lack of reviews.

Very good descriptions Ryan, you get a feel for the characters you wrote about. Write more soon, I'd like to see where this story goes. Raven :)