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| Orual 2006-11-19 ch 1,  | abuseThis is really sad. And realistic. Which makes it all the sadder. You capture Anna's naivety very well; you let your reader know what's happening even though the narrator doesn't. That takes skill. Good job with the southern talk, too. I can’t write accents to save my life. Excellent work. |
| Seimore Weiner 2006-09-06 ch 1, | abuseLol your English assignment. Now that ppl have reviewed you HAVE to post a new story (preferably Embers Of Amber, 2nd place goes to Cut Your Ties) Now, get working and post! Geoff |