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Allison 2006-09-19 . chapter 1
This is like the war cry of every teenager that has ever lived. I especially love the line "That every day is painful and beautiful" It's mysterious. I like.
Seeker of the Way 2006-09-19 . chapter 1
What a amazing expression of suffering! It's so human!*I'll listen! I feel the suffering of others and al these sheeple bother me, nobody careds about the SOUL or HEART anymore. HTey just take waht they want and leave you to die OR to become liek them. well, I REFUSE to be heartless and soulless like them! I will NEVER give up, never give in, no matter what, I will fight for facts in head and truth in heart.At leas that's a start .. recongnizing all teh sunshine is inside me, nad i wanna let it out so I can see it refelcted in your eyes, or better yet POURING out of your every pore when you feel teh inner blind-less sun inside you too! Then when we hold each other, it would be like holding a midrror, it would be like welcoem yourself back home to love and live again. TO be able to finally breathe without the hitch of tears and the vibretto of righteous anger!*oops! sowi, but your cool poem inspired me! *goes back to listening mode* sory, me straight male, ugh, me no so good at listening all the tiime, me do listen, but me also want ot help give stupid advice ad opinion. me sorry, ugh! SingleStraightLonelyMale has spoken!!(pause ... hahahahah! I'm so crazy!b ;-p)*I liked this poem a lot.
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