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| ossining 2006-09-09 ch 1,   | I like the flow of this piece. I can't say I really understand a lot of what's going on (appropriate, since the poem is titled 'foreign words'), but you have some interesting and definitely original images in this, like the first line - "Wearing steamrollers in your magazine eyes." A lot of what you write is stuff that I would never think of. Keep writing! :) |