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| Daydream Nation 2008-01-29 ch 2,  | abuseThat was adorable and very well written. I loved the creativity that went into this piece of work, too. Well done ;) |
| Nub in Denial 2007-07-06 ch 1, | abuseThat... was... so... cute! I love the irony of the whole thing. Thomas writes a selfish prophesy that ends up bringing a smexy Fire Prince, also his soul mate, to his door even though he really didn't mean for it to actually do anything. Lovely idea and it was wonderfully written. I love the ending too by the way :]! |
| Kharris Kyryn 2007-01-24 ch 2, | abusei loved this one ^.^ although tai's story was alittle hard to follow where i was (damn library) it was good anyway. i loved how thomas reacts to everything^^ i hope my slash storys get to be this good. i've been grammar-lazy lately. well, keep it up, ~kharris |
| Lady Psychic 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was good! I liked how the prophecy was worked into the story. |
| virginangelic 2006-09-06 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE this, especially the lyrical prophecy. I do like how you are able to weave a story from the prophecy. Although I kind of expected the ending, I didn't expect for the first part of the prophecy to come true. Do keep up the great work! |