Oh no, poor boys :( I love this. I hope you're all better after whatever made you sad. This was so pretty, though, so whatever sadness you experienced at least produced something good!

xoxo,The Astronaut

Wow.

It had a LOT for how short it is. I like how you incorporated the candy and the kiss at the bottom. A nice touch.

I liked the "wept" lines too... I'm a fan of repitition XD

Good job ;-;

xo

holy ** i didnt expect that. ** thats sad what made you write this story? email me some time