i like this a lot, and the way it has a positve message to it, that there will be hardship but to just keep going and it'll feel better, i love it, thank you for sharing

Ok this has got to be my favorite piece of yours, like ever (poems wise). Well, alright, I have a bunch of other favorites too but this one is definitely up there! I'm a big advocate for hoping through the worst times. I love the mood and delicate air this poem has, very well done. And remember, just as your poem said, it will be fine, just fine. And if you want to talk, you can always email me!

-Sarah

PS- Blaise sends kisses and tells me he wants to talk with you asap.PPS- Just fyi, I'm changing my penname on fanfic to ThisBabesTrouble, just to give ya the heads up.

I like the idea of placing our thoughts above the mundane and you state that so well within this metaphor.