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| Ghost in the Dark 2006-11-03 ch 1,  | abuseVery good (I would use "lovely" but for the moment I'm traumatized by it). I like the set up for this poem, the lines, and what they contain. As a mildly insane person, this was enjoyable. |
| ElevenElevenPM 2006-09-06 ch 1, | abusemwahaha. me likey. nice poem. just the stuff a random person like me would like. i expecially like the line 'my death is white; my life is black'. it feels to me like it's expressing how dark life is and how pure death can be :) great job keep writing |