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| Scribe Of All Trades 2008-02-04 ch 1,   | Again, I love the simple rhyme scheme in this and the raw honesty. |
| soliloquium 2007-12-27 ch 1, | again, i loved it, but the swear words kind of made the whole poem droop and lose importance. change the exclamation marks for periods, too. great one. m.t.h |
| Silently Yours 2006-10-10 ch 1, | Well that was intertaning. And thank you for the comment. And I wrote bliss for a friend that keep saying it. |
| Buritani89 2006-09-07 ch 1, | I kinda like this one but why you go on my page and leave a smartass review. Whatever...anyway keep up the good job! (>^^ |
| Penguins and Popsicles 2006-09-06 ch 1, | I like the irony and play on words, but It's quite a shallow poem. At least to me it is. But anyways, good job, but you can do better. And I looked up the spelling of tequila... And it could be both. I just don't know. ^^ |