haha, awesome xD didjoo get a good grade? ('twas for a grade, right? xD) it was awesomeness personified, yus yus it was =D i'm a bit hyper at the moment, so yeah. uhms, i like the idea of having a bunch of ideas in one idea ^_^; gewd job!

~Winter~

hehe! that made me laugh. reminds me a bit of my drama lessons... you're a good writer! keep going!! :P

This is okay. There are a few moments that are funny. The characters are very one-dimensional, which I'm sure you wanted.

I'm not real sure what else to say about it. It isn't bad, but it isn't that good, either. It's just a step above mediocre, I suppose. This might work if you take out one or two characters; there are too many to distinguish one from another.

Truly,Cobra Commander

Seriously you wrote all that for a play? INcluding the part where you argue? You must've got a good mark on it right?

wow. do u actually know these ppl? how funny! my dramam's kinda easier since i end up writing all the scripts and my muse (glances over to right) likes me a lot