The story of Charon Maurice is finally over! It was so enjoyable, both Touch of Death and Another Touch of Death! I'd miss this story a lot! Well done!

What was the ending about? The guy with the room full of papers? And I must have forgotten some things because I thought angels couldn't die again! Shouldn't angels have other abilities othen than flight? Charon didn't feel anything when Death was taken out of him? And shouldn't Death share some traits with Charon other than the appearance? Since both of them were one once. And Vincent just irked the shit out of me! Anyway, that was one entertaining chapter! Really nice!

Wonderful as always!!

...*laughing* That. That is awesome. That is beyond awesome. That is... ok, I really need to research some better adjectives.

Yeah. Only one thing I noticed. "(he was a rather short intern – soon to have an even short internship)" I think you meant "even shorter internship".

Other than that, sweet. A pleasure to read as always.

Over and out,

:) CD

*laughs* nice last-minute twist.

:) CD

If this is the end, I like it.

However, there was but one thing I noticed: "Unlike angels, car cannot fly."

Other than that, a fine chapter.

:) CD

Almost finished but not quite.

Oh this is fun.

XD CD

I was wondering when you're going to update?

*cracks up at the "stranger's" name* of course it is.

I also like the "that's not a word, it's a challenge" quote...

HEE! The climax beginneth! *rubs hands excitedly* To heck with homework, I want more!!

XD CD

...It's DEFINITELY nice to have the Boss on one's side. Now... somehow I think Satan's going to throw things for a loop, Michael's going to make it worse, but hopefully the world will survive, especially since Gabriel mentioned that Michael wanted to start the apocalypse 'early'.

Though of course I wait to see what REALLY happens.

:) CD

...So THAT's why it's according to Gabriel, not Michael. But if it's according to Gabriel, why does he narrate in the third person?

:) CD

I can guess quite well who the Entity in the last section is... XD

Gabriel already mentioned that the Boss liked Charon M. Now to see whether, when Charon M. is put back together, Charon D. will come with.

*nod* this is interesting...

:) CD

...WHAT?? *blinks* how could Charon be a business associate of Vincent?

Is the Boss providing him with a disguise or what? Or maybe it's an angel undercover? Or a demon undercover, that might be it.

Heh. I'll have to think about this one.

:D CD

Hey, I'm back! Anyway, it sure felt good to be back and reading your really good story! Was that really Charon? The hooded stranger? What if it was just a stupid illusion created by Vincent? And why would Vincent let Charon be his business associate? Strange. What is going to happen between Selena and Charon now that they did what they did in Venus Enterprise? They used to like each other but does the feeling still exist now? Poor Callisto, but I think she should give up on Charon. He's more suitable to be with Selena (I think...)! Anyway, these are really great chapters! There are mistakes littered throughout the chapters (you missed words, therefore making the sentences sound weird and incomplete) but I'm sure you will notice them if you read your chapters through! You've done a brilliant job on this really sucessful and enjoyable story! I would definitely recommend it to everyone else! Well done! :D

...Whoa. Now THAT's a touch worrisome...

Hey, at least now he's telling the truth when he says God's on his side!

And I do feel bad for Callisto. Charon is quite the oblivious one.

:) CD