kyah~ so cute~ thanks 4 updating and oh yeah thx for correcting the raymiel prononciation ive been doing it wrong this whole time *sweatdrop*

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

What's PMS? Sorry, I'm dense... What does Kurimu look like? Or Samantha? Maybe it'll explain in the next chapter? Anyways, this is AWESOME! If it was a manga, I would SO read it!

Sup? Just wanted you to know that I've read your story (and Catch My Smile) and I think you're pretty damn good at this. I can't wait to see how the story unfolds. I kinda think Kurimu may have a dark side..since she says a heart is "delicious." And Reirei so OBVIOUSLY has a shojou-ai crush...LOL
Well, anyway, good luck with your writing! If you want, you can check me out, too. See ya!

Kick ** so awesome can't wait to see more.

that was pretty original

Good one! It's really cute. Hm. Perhaps you could describe Shin's physical appearance. And, I dunno, but it didn't seem real enough .. the part where SAm tripped and fell on Shin and then Shin just tells her point blank that he thinks she's cute.

Either they've known each other for years and had a really intimate relationship before, or he's just one confident boy who just knows he's going to win.

Ehrm. But still... Cool, fun and entertaining! Oh, what's gonna happen next ?! Can't wait! Update sooN! ^_^

Wow, that was a good start. Very typical way of telling a story, on the whole, but still fun and entertaining. Is there going to be a romance bit in this story? I hope there is! ^_^

Well, good start! Your story has a potential, so keep it up! Until next review, update soon!

I can't wait to read more... your writing style is very distinctive and i really like it.