 Eloquent Catastrophe 2009-11-03 . chapter 29Ahh I love this story too much. It's really fun. Everything was adorable.
I must say though, you've got no need to be so self conscious and negative about your writing!! It's great! So shut up and like it! Grr. |
 Eloquent Catastrophe 2009-11-02 . chapter 19Hahahaha aahh wow I love that you "researched" by direct Play Doh experimentation. I can relate.
This story is wonderful. |
 Eloquent Catastrophe 2009-11-02 . chapter 16You and your chapter are adorable, not pathetic. Silly you, get out from under that desk (like months ago, ohh well). |
 Eloquent Catastrophe 2009-11-02 . chapter 13Your chapter names are perversely clever. I love them. I love them a lot. |
 Eloquent Catastrophe 2009-11-02 . chapter 12Funny story.
About the "Is it okay if I kiss you" thing.
In sixth grade, I was at a movie with a friend and my boyfriend (as much of a boyfriend as one can have in sixth grade), and my friend had told my boyfriend that I wanted him to kiss me. So at some point during this movie, as I sit between my friend and boyfriend, he goes all, "I have something to ask you. (insert very awkward pause here, followed by a "yeah?" from me.) Could I kiss you?"
I'm ending the story there.
I look back on it and laugh to myself, every time. Always. |
 learntosayhello 2009-10-12 . chapter 29I didn't think I'd become addicted to reading stories so quickly. Ben was sort of out of character toward the ending, but what the hell do I care? It was a damn happy-ass ending, I can tell you that much. :p |
 thefuturefreaksmeout 2009-09-27 . chapter 29love this! |
 Lain Alastair 2009-09-21 . chapter 1Awesome!! :D |
 Kannao 2009-09-06 . chapter 29MUAHAHAHAHA I LOVED IT! it was funny and clever, btw i love the way u start all the chapters lol, its cute and funny and sexy. Glad shane got a happy ending too! Shane had to be my fav char btw! Such a good story |
 xXxStarStrifexXx 2009-08-31 . chapter 16 That chapter was not pitiful - Ashley makes a very good neurotic girl in a trench coat! I needed to review this chapter just to say it - you and your writing do not suck! |
 askeladd 2009-08-24 . chapter 29That was awesome. Thank you so much for writing this. It was really fun to read. :) |
 InnocentKh 2009-08-13 . chapter 19 OH my god, AT LAST!
Haha!
Dont know how I came across u ( cos am all in and not this site), but I sure am glad :)
Woohoo! They kissed! There's angst! There's humour! Oh this is just puurect :D :D
~off to read off to read. Lalala~
PS, sorry am so hyper. Blame the rebull and this awesome chapter ;p |
 HannaThing 2009-08-01 . chapter 15Pop is soda around here too |
 Cedric Kale 2009-07-31 . chapter 4Hmm, yes... I just realised I've already read this before, so I'm not going to. I'm on the hunt for really good slashes, sorry. I had a feeling I'd read the story before but I kept thinking it was BUBBLES by someone whose pen name I can't quite remember, good story. See, most of the chapters of BUBBLES begin with innuendo as yours do. So sorry for my mistake. |
 Cedric Kale 2009-07-31 . chapter 3Hmm, yes it's like Dr. Pepper 14's Saturday Morning Cartoons. I had to go read that just so I could ocmpare. The only similarities are the characters (i.e. Cody's gay and in love with blah - they have this weird friendship that's jokingly sexual) and the weird family/friends. The twins are cool.
Your writing style is by far better (Dr Pepper 14's is good but your's is better) and there are a lot of differences for example, there's more school and less home, at least so far.
I hope it gets better. |