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| Follow The Pendulum 2006-09-07 ch 4,  | abuseThis should definately be made into a song, with a nice acostic guitar part or piano. Summer love is very tragic sometimes (usually) |
| august harlequin 2006-09-06 ch 3, | abuselove the contrasts and 'second' thoughts in brackets. very nice. |