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Autumn
Guardrail
2006-10-28 . chapter 1
This has a lot of life to it for a haiku. I LOVE this. Great work and keep writing.
hanfiddle
2006-10-26 . chapter 1
This provides a very nice image of fall morning or midday
suggestion for the last line:
In the breeze kids play
which: links the fluttering leaves and the playing kids to the breeze...
Good work: keep on writing
Theory Of The 4th Dimension
2006-09-07 . chapter 1
Such a sparkling image...a short tale of forgotten innocence, at least that's what I got out of this...
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