I was rereading this and found chapter 4 - a very nice surprise i must say - please update soon, i loved it! :)

will you please keep going beyond chpt. 4?!?
i wanna know what happens!!

its good. and funni. their lookign for naked people, that got me laughing.
keep it up^.0

I like your style in this. And I like the story so far, and I hope you continue.

naked people...lol >< nice story^^ try to leave the spaces between the phrases out, though, it's kinda annoying.
anyway, I'm nagging^^ update soon!

This story kicks **. :]

This chapter is much happier. I like it. It's a nice balance to the sadness. Keep up the good work.

I like it. Please become an author. Your work makes me both cry and laugh.

i like this. weird friends-to-lovers stories are good... :] and pirates! ee!

Loved it. Please update soon! I was quite shocked about the break up lol very well written!

The break-up was well handled. Niall seems like a good match for Gabe. I swear Niall has a hard-on for him, too;)

Hmm, Niall seems rather *cough cough* interested...in Gabe. Niall and Anna are right; Gabe *should* tell someone.

Dramatic start! Poor Gabe:(

hope you continue, love it.

This is really cute, especially at the end there. Poor Gabe, his stepfather is a **wit by the looks of it. I'm really looking forward to the next update! I hope its soon!