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| half-sketched.staccatos 2007-09-15 ch 1, | konban wa I loved that first part: "When I'd jump I'd swear I could fly. / But then you came and brought me down to earth / Locked me in a cage I can't escape." You make it sound like falling in love was a horrible thing, but you did it in such a poetic way. *grin* BTW - I loved your profile... I wish I had someone or something like Buddy. Wouldn't that be cool if that could happen? The closest I've come is having a sugar glider, which I love dearly. Random: You ever read that book by Dr. Seuss called The Lorax? It makes me tear up every time I read that; how pyscho is that? LoL. But your profile reminded me of that book. Anyway. Beatiful poem. I'll be watching out for more of your stuff, so please post some more soon. :) Gute nacht, tomodachi -Shan- |
| vertex 2006-11-27 ch 1, | you capture that feeling that everyone seems to have perfectly |
| Hunter Victoria 2006-11-07 ch 1, | Amazing. |
| Princess-anna57 2006-09-11 ch 1, | *applaudes*, well done! Keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |