=) very apt, can disscuss it online moe indepth later! but, I have to comment (even though i think ive forgotten my account, whoopsz)

that song inspired you didnt it? think yu almost wrapped the whole package up nicely~ and as you always do, the link back was powerfull

constructive side~ if you can make it flow more~ but then again, im more of a traditionalist, so unflowy is more modern I heard =) hehehe

the nesecities start/end hits hard, very apt. very forcefull.

-ue